A Song !!
Imagine a human being who feels that he has lost on most fronts in his life. He does not know whom to blame. I think of this is a song by such a person.
Me to God,
Just tell me why did you kill my bird?
She was a vivid bird of innovation,
Soaring high in the wind of my imagination
Can that wind now carry away my tears?
I have prepared for it, not much…. Just the open doors..
Don’t you dare speak a word,
Just tell me why did you kill my bird?
She was a tender bird, filled with emotion..
Always flying around me, to show her compassion..
I never understood, but it must have been hard on her wings..
Surely a crime that I have messed up on so many things..
So don’t ever dare speak a word,
Just tell me why did you kill my bird?
She was a bird, who thought different,
Vultures, flycatchers, eagles, owls, cormorant;
But now I lie down with only clichéd thoughts in my mind,
Surely this must be a dream, can’t the time now unwind?
You don’t need to speak a word,
Now I know why did you kill my bird..
God to Me
I never killed the bird my son,
It is you; you are the one!!
You need to look in, rather than blame…
The bird can be a phoenix rising through the flame….
9 Comments:
are lovely...magnificent compilation aahe he... can understand the situation...kadhitari mala pan asa vaatla hota...pan don't think I have it in me to put these things into flowing words like these...anyway felt really good reading this...
want to read this more..
once twice thrice n times...
until I can see it from your eyes...
Ajay
Excellent work mak..tu je kahi kartos te baaaaaaaaap asta..really I mean it..
The beauty of your poem lies in the end and more so in the fact that that is just the beginning.
Aare I never knew this skill of yours..
But yes it hits you right where you want it...Its so true...
Hey Mak! classy!!
Just thought your poem deserved a more fitting comment than my earlier one so here goes.
At the start it seems as sorrowful as a requiem,
Growing darkness all around it seems.
Vanishing hopes depicted like a tunnel that deepens,
But the light at the end a new beginning betokens.
I read it today. was very busy when u talked about it on group.
awesome mak !!
मकरन्द, तू छान कविता लिहीलि आहेस.
just really AWESOME!!!
the end part is really mind blowing..
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